Any readers?

<p>I just finished my common essay about a personal experience. I would really like some opinions. Its a pretty rough version, so criticisms are more than welcome.</p>

<p>sure! i wouldn't mind.</p>

<p>Sure, just pm it to me.
Or you can e-mail it to me at lemon<em>lime</em><a href="mailto:rush@yahoo.com">rush@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p>sure pm it to me or email it to <a href="mailto:rk1956@gmail.com">rk1956@gmail.com</a></p>