Essay personal enough?

Applying to College
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<p>I posted my essay here a few days ago, and a lot of people who reviewed it said that I should try to convey a little more about who I was etc. So, I edited it and added more feelings etc, and I would really appreciate it if some people could read it and give me some comments. Just let me know if you're willing, and I'll PM it to you...thanks!</p>

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<p>Bump...anybody?</p>

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<p>pm it to me</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>Sure, I'll read it</p>

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<p>i'll read it too.</p>

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<p>If you still need one more person I'll read it as well.</p>

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<p>Me too, I know the feeling.</p>

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<p>i'll do it</p>

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<p>i</a> can help</p>

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<p>PMed to all of you</p>

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<p>Bump...somebody please?</p>

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<p>ill read it as well..</p>

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<p>thank you, I PMed it</p>

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<p>i can read.</p>

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<p>Thanks, I PMed it to you</p>

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<p>I'll read it.</p>

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<p>me too, i know exactly how you feel!</p>

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<p>Sent to vertigofrog...Cliff_hanger, your inbox is full</p>

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<p>Sorry about that, you can send it now</p>