<p>It would be greatly appreciated if anyone is willing to take a look at my admissions short answer for UMich! I'm kind of unsure about it and I wanted to see if anyone would check it out and give me some advice? I want to shorten it a little, it's currently 280 words but I feel like I can make it more condensed. Thanks for any help! No fellow 2009ers please!</p>
<p>I'll take a look at it, I'm a freshman in college</p>
<p>i'll look at it and give you feedback. give me a message</p>
<p>I'll take a look!</p>