<p>It would be greatly appreciated if anyone is willing to take a look at my admissions short answer for UMich! I'm kind of unsure about it and I wanted to see if anyone would check it out and give me some advice? I want to shorten it a little, it's currently 280 words but I feel like I can make it more condensed. Thanks for any help! No fellow 2009ers please!</p>
<p>Bump bump bump.</p>
<p>PM your essay and I'll read & critique it.</p>
<p>sure. pm it to me.</p>
<p>Is it for an activity? I'll read it if so...</p>