Anybody want to read my essay? Please?

<p>I have an essay ready for SUNY at Albany and Buffalo, and Rutgers New Brunswick. Does anybody have the time to read it for me? Thank you very much.</p>

<p>Bump............</p>

<p>k i'll read it dude</p>

<p>Thanks man.</p>

<p>Anybody else?</p>

<p>Bumping with a question. My teacher said "Don't use "I" in these type essays." How the hell am I supposed to write why I'm interested in a school without using "I"?</p>