anybody willing to give me some last-second advice on my Harvard essay b4 I submit?

<p>10 char 10 char</p>

<p>Sure, PM it over.</p>

<p>toss it over in a pm.</p>

<p>sure. glad to help</p>

<p>Sure, I can help if you want.</p>

<p>Mentos, can you clear your inbox? It’ s full, apparently.</p>

<p>yeah, message it to me</p>

<p>Yea I willing to read it also.</p>

<p>I like it, it conveyed your passion well and simultaneously highlighting some achievements and experiences you have had. only two paragraphs though, but it’s fine, don’t change it.</p>