Anyone have a few moments to critique my essay?

[roxlo]

<p>Post here and I'll PM you my essay. Thanks in advance!</p>

[fromthesouth]

<p>i will if u want</p>

<p>im writing my own essay atm ..maybe you can critique mine as well :P</p>

[SmajoHurko]

<p>I will read it if you want</p>