<p>My essay? It's a start but I'll work with it when I turn in my applications for college. Any critiques or anything else would be kindly appreciated!</p>
<p>Are you asking for someone to read over your essay?
Because if you are, I'll read it!
Just PM me.</p>
<p>Yeah! Thanks. I sent it :)!</p>
<p>I'll take a look if you want =)</p>
<p>Thanks! I sent it :)!</p>