Anyone look over/proofread essay for "what passions make me unique?" (due in 9 hrs)

[altectech]

<p>300 words. For UIUC. Would anyone be willing to give me feedback and/or advice on it? Thanks.</p>

[shreya.iitk]

<p>I'll do it..........</p>

[woohoo_2]

<p>if you want a critique you can send it over.
im not to good at editing though.</p>