<p>Hey, so I'm a senior and I wrote my UIUC college essays. Would anyone mind reading them? I'll inbox them to whomever is willing to read them. Please rate them on a scale of 1-10. Tell me what's good, what's bad, what I should change or remove and what I should keep or fix/enhance. Some tips or strategies would be appreciated. Also I overshot the 300 word limit by 30 on Essay 1 and 20 on Essay 2. Is that okay or should I shorten them to exactly 300 or 310? Thanks!</p>
<p>I can take a look </p>
<p>Bump</p>
<p>PM me and i would love to help</p>
<p>Thanks @thekoolkid</p>
<p>I already applied, so I can look at them.</p>
<p>You can PM me it.</p>
<p>Thanks @UC6792</p>