Anyone up to review my Dartmouth essay?

I’m worried it falls too much into the “mission trip” cliche, but I do feel that my perspective on it was fresh. Anyone up to read it to weigh my worries?

I’m just a lowly applicant but I’m down to read if you want. (Don’t worry all my essays are already written i won’t steal it).

yea for sure. pm me

I can read it!

I’ll read it, PM me

I can read it. Im a freshman in college

I’m a Dartmouth applicant too. Wanna exchange essays?