<p>I don't know if it's good at all for the purposes of college admissions. Please tell me what I need to improve and I will gladly and eager take your advice! :) I will read your essays should you want me to.</p>
<p>Thanks in advance!</p>
<p>Sure i’m glad to read it and give you some feedback. PM it</p>
<p>Show me yours and I’ll show you mine ;)</p>
<p>anyone else? :)</p>
<p>I’ll gladly read it!</p>