<p>It's 585 words, or something like that, but I don't think I can really cut it down anymore. Well, maybe I can. That's why I need someone to read it. I'll PM it to whoever wants to, and if anyone wants to swap essays, I'm willing!</p>
<p>Sure, PM it to me.</p>
<p>Thanks. PM-ing it now!</p>
<p>Sure, I don’t mind reading. PM me as well.</p>
<p>I’d be happy to give you feedback :)</p>