Anyone want to comment on a humorous essay?

<p>I'm '09 but I am intrigued.</p>

<p>send it over!</p>

<p>Well, I revamped the essay...does anyone want to see the new one? It might be a bit more humorous. I think.
Two things I'd like to hear back on: do my attempts at humor work? and does this show anything about me?</p>

<p>send it to me and I'll tell you :P</p>

<p>Sure, pm me =)</p>

<p>I need something to cheer me up! would like to read it</p>