Best essay i have ever written! Need CRITICISM!

College Essays
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<p>Ok, so i just spend about 3.5 weeks creating and editing one of the best essays i have ever written (at least that is what i think)! Anyway, leave a note if you wanna check it out... </p>

<p>this is primarly for college students but i mean if your a 09 student we can work a trade off!! <--- i just dont want to be cheated... lol</p>

<p>THANKS A BUNCH!</p>

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<p>pm me (i'm 09 though...)</p>

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<p>anymore takers?</p>

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<p>sure (I'm also an '09) I'd love to help.</p>

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<p>I'd be happy to review. PM or email me. Which colleges are you targeting?</p>

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<p>I'll read it.</p>

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<p>i'm down. pm it.</p>

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<p>ill help pm it over im not 09 so no worries</p>

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<p>pm it over</p>

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<p>pm, not 09</p>

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<p>PM it. :] weeee.</p>

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<p>I'll take a look :]
be sure t send the prompt as well.</p>

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<p>pm it over</p>

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<p>ill look at it if you want..</p>

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<p>pm me, i think i'd be able to help</p>

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<p>pm it to me</p>

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<p>pm it to me. I'm 09 tho.</p>