Anyone want to look over my UC Personal statement? Crtiques, improvements welcomed.

College Essays
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<p>I already have had several teachers look over it, however I want someone who does not know me to read it. Any takers?</p>

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<p>I can, If You still need.</p>

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<p>Hi,</p>

<p>I can take a look.</p>

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<p>Hey, I can review your essay if you need it.</p>