I need some help with my personal statement, I have not had the opportunity to have a good second set of eyes look it over and at this point I believe that I am just mindlessly rewriting it. I am not sure if it is necessarily powerful enough and I am someone who struggles to take my ideas and communicate them through essays or words on paper in general. I would be extremely grateful if anyone would be willing to look at it, and I would be willing to read your paper in return if you’d like as well 
I would be willing to either PM or email it to you, thanks in advance!
I am still looking for someone to read it over, and I’d be willing to return the favor! Thanks!
I’d be glad to look it over if you’re still need eyes. I’m still working on mine and need a 2nd opinion too.
@collegeGeezer Thanks man! I’ll PM you my essay and I’d be glad to take a look over your essay too
Sure PM me 
@MrAccountant Thank you so much! I sent the link over PM
I know it is everyone’s Thanksgiving holiday, but I would be extremely grateful if one more person could read and give me suggestions to my Personal Statement. Thanks!!!
I’d be willing to, if you’d like to read mine as well that would be kind. PM me? :]
@ruetherford Absolutely! I sent you a PM with a google docs link