Anyone want to proofread my Atlas Shrugged essay?

<p>I'm not sure if this is the right place for this thread, but I'm entering the Ayn Rand Institute's Atlas Shrugged essay contest and it would be awesome if someone could proofread my essay for me. The deadline is Friday and I just finished the book late Monday night, so it's all a bit rushed. Any input would be greatly appreciated. In fact, be as harsh as you want! Please and thank you! [:</p>

<p>I’ll read it, but I’m really not into the third prompt so if you chose that one, bah. I could still read it though.</p>

<p>Just PM me.</p>

<p>In case you are wondering, I entered this contest as well and already submitted my essay.</p>