Anyone want to read my commonapp essay?

<p>Im planning to use this essay for my EA colleges. Ive already proofread it a few times and had someone read over it but I would really appreciate some honest opinions.</p>

<p>sure im bored send it over PM yonder.</p>

<p>Sure. Just PM it.</p>

<p>I would love to read it . I am a senior btw so i completely understand if you are not comfortable with it but I would love to help!! PM it if you want</p>

<p>sure. pm it if you'd like</p>

<p>pm but i'm one of the dreaded 09s</p>

<p>pm me. i'm an 09er. we should exchange essays!</p>

<p>I will read it! PM me.</p>

<p>i would love to help if you pm</p>

<p>surely i would to love to read it. send it</p>

<p>I'm an 09'er. PM if you want. If you're uncomfortable I understand.</p>

<p>i'd like to read</p>

<p>PM it over, sir or madam.</p>

<p>pm it to me</p>

<p>I'd be happy to proofread it and offer my suggestions. PM it.</p>

<p>sure, i'll read it and give suggestions</p>