<p>hi, i would really appreciate if someone would read my admission essay. i think that it is pretty good but you know, some pointers come always handy. if you are interested pm me. or it would be eve better if you could contact me over icq (242470490), msn (<a href="mailto:yosei42@hotmail.com">yosei42@hotmail.com</a>) or skype (yosei43).</p>
<p>sure , will read and reply to you.</p>
<p>i can try to give you some feedback</p>
<p>PM me your essay</p>