anyone want to read?

<p>writing is not my forte and I would really appreciate it if someone would help me and give me some constructive criticism. I actually was planning using the chose your own topic choice but after I read through the paper it may fall under a significant experience.</p>

<p>help please</p>

<p>Haha don’t sell yourself short yet! I’ll give it a peer edit.</p>

<p>i’ll read it and give some feedback if you want</p>