anyone want to review my essay?

<p>I am applying to CMC as my first choice school. Its my dream school, but unfortunately its a reach. I'm hoping my essay will help so it needs to be killer. Any help will be much appreciated.</p>

<p>ill take a look at it </p>

<p>omarascha@**********</p>

<p>if that^^ didnt show pm me</p>

<p>If you still need help with your essay, I can take a look.</p>