Great Essay, need readers - HYPS, Claremont and Williams

College Essays
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<p>Haven't been on this website for a while. I was planning on submitting my essay in a few days, but then I remembered how I used to discuss college stuff and people would critique each others college essays here - so I decided to take advantage of the opportunity.</p>

<p>Can a few people read my essay and give me good feedback. FYI I will be checking your credentials to make sure I wont be getting ripped off. Not that theres much to rip off anyway - It's pretty specific to me. I'm planning on applying to Claremont McKenna College, Williams College, Cornell, Princeton, University of the Pacific and a few other schools to top it off.</p>

<p>Ideas on how to improve it would be greatly appreciated. Suggestions are welcome! Even if you do plan to rip me off after reading it, at least take the time to pm me a few sentences on what I can change or suggestions lol.</p>

<p>Just post and I'll pm it right over...</p>

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<p>I’ll trade essays if u want</p>

<p>pm me!</p>

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<p>I’m a parent and will take a look if you want another reader.</p>

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<p>PM them over! I’m not applying to any of those schools so don’t worry.</p>

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<p>bump 10char</p>

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<p>PM me. I’m not applying to Claremont, Williams, any Ivies, UoP.</p>

<p>Check my post history (chance threads) for my full list. I did consider princeton for a while but not anymore.</p>

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<p>Hey, I’d love to give you some suggestions! :smiley: PM me?</p>

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<p>ill check your essay.
e-mail then to <a href="mailto:kylezkdlf@gmail.com">kylezkdlf@gmail.com</a> and ill try my best to critique your essay.</p>

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<p>if you still need a reader, pm me.</p>

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<p>i’ll read–PM it! :)</p>