<p>T.T I think it's pretty bad,but i dont know how to make it better...I need help!!! anyone would like to proofread it ?</p>
<p>Sure, I’d be happy to. PM it to me.</p>
<p>T.T I think it's pretty bad,but i dont know how to make it better...I need help!!! anyone would like to proofread it ?</p>
<p>Sure, I’d be happy to. PM it to me.</p>