Anyone willing to proofread my Cornell Architecture essay?

<p>If you're willing to, please PM me! Help is very much appreciated! :)</p>

<p>The prompt is for those applying to the College of Architecture, Art, and Planning:
How does the major you would like to study in the College of Architecture, Art, and Planning match your intellectual, academic, and career interests? Discuss any activities you have engaged in that are relevant to your chosen major.</p>

<p>please help out! D:</p>

<p>pm me :slight_smile: i got into architecture</p>