Just wrote my first draft for the 500 word essay. Is anyone willing to read it?

<p>Just wrote my 500 word essay for the 'College of Arts and Science'. Was hoping someone could read and critique it for me. If you're willing to read my essay I prefer you've already sent your application in or are applying to another college, but I'll be allowing anyone to critique the essay regardless.</p>

<p>Me, too, hope somebody could read my essays.</p>

<p>im applying to different school. pm me your essay :)</p>