<p>I would greatly appreciate anyone willing to read my essays and give me some feedback. I am trying to submit my app by the end of the day. For the second response to make sense, you should know that I had a weak freshman year by UW-Madison standards, but there is a strong upward trend in my grades. Also, I'm using the second one for another university that asks for 300 words or less, will the brevity reflect badly? I'm also concerned that these essays don't directly answer the questions and that they aren't personal enough.</p>
<p>I will PM you the essays, or if you prefer, i can e-mail them as attachments.</p>