anyone willing to read most meaningful activity short answer?

Applying to College
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<p>I wrote this in about a concentrated 30 minutes, so I'm not sure how it turned out. Apparently, you're supposed to show and not tell. I need direction. a lot of it. anyone willing to read and give advice?</p>

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<p>Sure, give me a PM.</p>

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<p>I want to help! Can you take a look at my short answer too? I wrote it up in about the same fashion as yours.</p>

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<p>Sure, I'll look at it.</p>

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<p>let's trade!</p>

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<p>Don't know if you need any more help, but I could give it the once over. FYI, I'm not an applicant to college, I've already graduated and when in college worked i n the admissions office.</p>

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<p>Oh, i hope its not too late to trade reading the most meaningful essays. Eeeek, i think i told more than showed. <em>sigh</em> i hate these weird short essays. No wait, i hate essays in general</p>

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<p>i'll read them</p>

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<p>it's cool guys. i think I got it. thanks so much for the help, I really appreciate it. :)</p>