<p>Hi everyone, I just finished two short answer essays for my application, and I was wondering if you guys could please critique them? The first one deals with an encounter with difference, and the second one deals with drug abuse. Also, there is one pertaining to academic strengths. Please read them, I would appreciate any help very much. Please send me a pm or reply here if you can critique them. They're short also. Thanks very much in advance.
Happy new year!</p>
<p>I really need help, I would greatly appreciate you guys looking into this.</p>
<p>i'll take a look</p>
<p>Sent, thank you.</p>
<p>Please, I really want to know if I did well or not.. just read them and say good or bad, even that helps out. Please I'm begging you..</p>