Anyone willing to read scholarship essay?

<p>Grammar should be pretty sound (though maybe a few careless errors, I usually save the hard lookover for right before I turn it in). I am mainly looking for people to look at it for content and general overall feel. The scholarship is the only way I can go to my dream school, so I really want it to be good (:</p>

<p>I'm also open to swaps, although I am a part of this applicant class obviously.</p>

<p>i hate bumping, but…bump? (:</p>

<p>I’m interested in reading your essay, send me a message!</p>