Application needs to be sent out TONIGHT! Can someone critique my essay?

<p>Please help. It's for Boston Univ. Post or PM me and I'll PM it to you.</p>

<p>why does it need to out tonight?</p>

<p>Its due by December first because its for a scholarship, but my moms credit card is going to have stuff go through tomorrow and there won't be money to send it out tomorrow.</p>

<p>Shoot it over, I'll read it.</p>