I recently began working on my college essays for the 2016-2017 school year and I’ve become stuck. If someone would critique what I have so far and let me know what I can improve on, I would really appreciate it! Let me know if you’re willing to help me out and I’ll pm my essay to you 
Please, and thank you!
Here’s the prompt: Considering your lifetime goals, discuss how your current and future academic and extra-curricular activities might help you achieve your goals.