<p>Hello!
I just finished writing one of my essays. Would anyone care to take a look at it and give me feedbacks? This is the promt: We are interested in learning more about you and the context in which you have grown up, formed your aspirations and accomplished your academic successes. Please describe the factors and challenges that have most shaped your personal life and aspirations. How have these factors caused you to grow? </p>
<p>Please let me know if you're willing to help a challenged writer!
Thanks a lot :)</p>
<p>I’m actually doing it right now (: haha. I haven’t written my bio essay yet though - only the other two. If you ever want to switch and critique each other’s we can. We’ll already have them written so it’s not like we can plagiarize or anything!</p>
<p>haha, yes. that sounds great. well right now i’m stuck on the second essay… i’m hitting a bit of a writer’s block. are you sending an additional info essay?</p>
<p>The additional info isn’t really meant to be an essay per se, but a place where you can mention any special circumstances that you couldn’t cover before or didn’t mention because they didn’t fit neatly into any of the categories.</p>
<p>I have some time to read essays and I’d love to give you feedback on your biographical essay.</p>
<p>If I write the additional essay it will be about physics and how I really love the subject except my teacher was terrible and how I had to teach myself everything and stuff… DX</p>