<p>I got -3 on my jan sat so i want to help out. i have a few common CB tricks and i want to point them out. These are some common sentence errors.</p>
<li>Jack and James are both very good golfers, but he is the better one.</li>
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<p>he is wrong. It is ambiguous and is an error. He can refer to either Jack or James.</p>
<li>Of the three plants, the blue violet was the more beautiful.</li>
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<p>More is wrong. More is used when comparing 2 things, when 3 or more things are compared it is MOST.</p>
<li> Of the two composers, Mozart was the more prolific.</li>
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<p>More is correct here since it is 2 things being compared.</p>
<li>Among the two girls was a lot of tension.</li>
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<p>Among is wrong. It is used for comparing three or more things. BETWEEN is correct. it is used when 2 things are involved. </p>
<li> The horde of bugs are very dangerous.</li>
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<p>ARE is wrong. Horde is singular, so use IS instead of are.</p>
<li>Janice was not only smart, but cool aswell.</li>
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<p>But is the error. It is an idiom. Whenever the words not only are shown, the words but also must be shown.</p>
<li> John was either an idiot or a genius.</li>
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<p>If you didn’t know what an idiom was this is an example. Either… or is an idiom. Once you see the word either, or must follow it.</p>
<p>still don’t get it?</p>
<li>Shelly was neither naive nor stupid.</li>
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<p>Neither… nor is an idiom. Once you see neither it must be followed by nor.</p>
<li>The company is very large; they are composed of thousands of people.</li>
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<p>They is wrong. the company is singular like horde, and therefore should be followed by IT. So instead of they there should be it.</p>
<p>This is Gandhi, the writing kid. I want to help you own the SAT writing as it is the easiest section to improve on. i went from 450 to 700+ in January.</p>
<p>And i shall help you too. I will make more writing posts as long as I don’t get banned for doing so.</p>