Boston U essay..will anyone read/critique?

<p>The title pretty much says it. Also, it's 79 words over the limit, so I need help trimming as well. I would prefer no 2014ers though. Thanks in advance!</p>

<p>yeah sure! i’ll read it. I’m not applying to BU or any school like it, and all of my apps are in. i can help you cut it down. my essay for UCF was originally 1430 words over the limit, and i cut it down to a little over 500! PM me and i’ll read it!</p>