Both UC Essays, can anyone take a look?

College Essays
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<p>I'm done with both of the prompts needed for all UC applicants.</p>

<p>If anybody could take a quick glimpse at either of them, that would be great.</p>

<p>Positive or critical feedback is welcome!</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

2

<p>sure ill look it over for you. send it over</p>

3

<p>I’ll look it over</p>

4

<p>I’d be glad to critique them.</p>

5

<p>Sure I’ll read them</p>

6

<p>yeah sure I’ll take a look!</p>

7

<p>No problem. just PM me and I’ll get back to you ASAP.</p>

8

<p>sure, i’ll give it a look and give you some feedback</p>

9

<p>Okay i’ll take a look.</p>