<p>If you still need help, I'm on a roll today.</p>
<p>PM it to me.</p>
<p>i'm worried mine might sound too hippyish also, pm it over and i'll critique yours</p>
<p>i d like to read</p>
<p>got into brown ED, PM me</p>
<p>i'd like to have a read and help.im not applying to brown, but to most of the other ivies :D</p>
<p>I'll read it, if you'd like. XD I just finished my Brown essay.</p>
<p>I'll read it.</p>