<p>critiques needed for my BROWN essay. it's straight from the heart, but i'm afraid it may sound too hippy-ish or something.</p>
<p>I'll read. PM?</p>
<p>I'll read it, I've got time.</p>
<p>I'll give it a read!</p>
<p>pm it over</p>
<p>hey, i got into brown last year. i'll take a look. pm me!</p>
<p>I'll read it.</p>
<p>I'm willing, PM me</p>
<p>if that helps.PM me</p>
<p>I'll read. PM me.</p>
<p>I will take a look</p>
<p>i have some time: pm me!</p>
<p>i would like to read it, pm me</p>
<p>I'll take a look to!! pm me</p>
<p>I'm more than happy to read over it and give you some feedback.</p>
<p>i'd love to help, pm me</p>
<p>ill be happy to proofread for yaa</p>
<p>i'll read it , too</p>
<p>perhaps you could read mine? (no pressure)</p>
<p>Hi</p>
<p>If you would like some constructive critisism, please feel free to PM me your essay. I hope to hear from you :P</p>
<p>PM me too if you like.=)
I'm called scrapper at my school cuz I'm good at criticizing.....
(You know it's been exaggerated though)</p>