BS/MD Essays

Since most of the BSMD programs require a “Why medicine essay”, is there anyone with experience in regards to these programs who’d be willing to read one of my essays? It feels super disjointed to me, and I don’t think I really make a convincing point, but I’m uncertain as to how to improve…

Please help!

I’d also appreciate any tips anyone may have for writing these types of essays!

@NoFutureXD - IMHO - write why you chose medicine and what you have done to develop your interest