Ca nsomeone please read my F&M Supplemental Essay?

<p>Can someone please read my Franklin and Marshall Supplemental essay which has a 500 CHARACTER Limit. The topic is: What led to your decision to apply to Franklin & Marshall College? I am looking For grammar/style issues as well as content. Thanks in ADVANCE!</p>

<p>Are you looking for parent or student feedback? I am willing to read it however if you are looking for student feedback, my son said he would be willing to read it, too. </p>

<p>Best of luck to you applying to F&M!</p>

<p>How do you put all the things you want to say in JUST 500 CHARs? I can't!!! Can someone give me advice on this? T___T</p>

<p>I'm currently trying to answer that question in 500 chars. It's scary!</p>

<p>Hey, yeah am willing to read through, and suggest corrections. e-mail it to temybroder***********</p>

<p>They read so many… get to the point and try not to be so general. Read it with every other sentence, take out what doesn’t move it forward. I love this school. I always visit and wish I went here. The workload is heavy though! I hope you don’t procrastinate…</p>