Can a couple people read my GTech Supp essay? (150 words)

College Essays
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<p>Hello,</p>

<p>Can a couple people here go through my fairly short Tech essay and point out if I made any overly cliche statements or if it's just okay in general? Just say the word and i'll pm it to you. I'm out of state so I don't know if this is good enough. Thanks.</p>

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<p>Bump, anyone?</p>

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<p>I’d love to read but I am not a professional so it is your wish to share it or not</p>

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<p>No experience with GTech, but I’d be happy to read it.</p>

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<p>Thank you both! I pmed my essay to both of you.</p>

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<p>I would definitely help you out.</p>