Can a recently accepted student or current student glance over my Penn supplement? :)

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<p>Hi guys,</p>

<p>I'm applying to SEAS RD at Penn, and I was wondering if a current or recently accepted had the time to glance over my Why Penn supplement. I know essays are important, especially at highly competitive colleges like Penn, so I would really appreciate some feedback.</p>

<p>Post here and I'll PM it to you.</p>

<p>Thanks!
-Wong</p>

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<p>i’ll take a look, I was accepted Wharton though, so just be warned, I don’t know too much about the engineering school</p>

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<p>Same. ED to Wharton.</p>

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<p>i guess i’ll be the best person to help you out…
i got in the jerome and fisher program of management and tech… (SEAS + wharton)
PM it to me…
btw, i’m soooo excited for Penn :P</p>

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<p>Thanks guys! I’ll be sending it out in less than 30 min, once I get back home.</p>

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<p>If it’s not too late, I EDed to SEAS and got in, so if you want I can read your essay too.</p>

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<p>Haha, it’s never too late. The more the merrier. I’m about to send it.</p>

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<p>i got accepted ED to SEAS too, i’ll be happy to read it if you’d like!</p>

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<p>ED CAS. I’ll help if you want</p>

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<p>Ok, thanks guys. I’ll send you the revised version once I make the changes that TheWikiMan and blorgit suggested.</p>

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<p>I got into LSM…I can read it.</p>

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<p>Freshman in SEAS. If you still need someone to take a look let me know.</p>

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<p>I can give you some feedback as well if you’re still looking. Could you take a look at my essay too?</p>

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<p>Ok guys, I just sent it out. Thanks for reading!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it
Jerome Fisher M&T 2015! (Wharton & Engineering)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you need more people.</p>

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<p>Xc66266 and Zubin: Congrats on the Jerome Fisher Program. Could you post your stats as that will help future candidates like me…</p>