<p>Hi, I'm really nervous about my transfer essay because it's for my dream school. So, I would really appreciate any constructive criticism!</p>
<p>Thanks,</p>
<p>Alex</p>
<p>sure, how do i access the essay?</p>
<p>Ill read it PM me.</p>
<p>Sure. I'll help you out if you're feeling nervous! =]</p>
<p>Thanks everyone for helping me with my essay and giving me some constructive criticism. You all are so nice :)</p>