Can anyone PLEASE quickly review my Common App Essay?

College Essays
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<p>Just as the title says. Please pm me if you're interested! :D</p>

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<p>YEAH SURE!-- I’m actually looking for help as well, so I could read your essays, you read mine?</p>

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<p>YEAH SURE!-- I’m actually looking for help as well, so I could read your essays, you read mine?</p>