Can anyone proofread and edit my CCA essay, please?

<p>The prompt:
An untimed writing sample or essay of at least 250 words must accompany the application. The essay is considered part of your portfolio. It allows us to learn more about you and is your opportunity to help us complete the picture of you, in addition to your grades, portfolio, test scores, and recommendations.</p>

<p>Your essay should address the major influences on your decision to pursue art, architecture, design, or writing. It should also address how you see yourself contributing to the CCA community, specifically with respect to the college’s values, summarized below.</p>

<p>CCA understands the important role of artists, designers, architects, and writers in solving social, cultural, environmental, and economic problems. The educational experience we provide supports the following values:
• cultivating intellectual curiosity, risk taking, collaboration, innovation, compassion, and integrity
• fostering social justice and community engagement
• promoting diversity on our campuses
• advocating sustainability and environmental responsibility</p>

<p>If you're willing to lend your help, I'll gladly PM my essay for any proofreading, editing and personal suggestions :) your help will be VERY APPRECIATED, Thank you...</p>

<p>so.. anyone..? please help..? :((</p>

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