<p>Hey guys! I'm new to CC and I was wondering if anyone would be willing to give honest criticism on my college essay? It's a rough copy so I know its not the best but anything would help! I really want this essay the best it can be</p>
<p>thanks</p>
<p>Id be happy to help edit if you message me!</p>
<p>I can’t pm since I don’t have 5 or more posts 
is it okay if I message you via email?</p>
<p>Take 15-30 minutes and answer posts until you get to 15, otherwise it’s difficult to communicate.</p>
<p>Alrighty! I’ll do it right now thanks :)</p>
<p>I’ll take a look! I will PM you my email.</p>
<p>Can we exchange our essays?</p>
<p>Watching your enthusiastic efforts, I’ll read your essay. I’m a working professional.</p>
<p>I’m pretty good with grammar, maybe we can exchange (:</p>
<p>I submitted my applications about a week ago! I’d be glad to read your essay and critique it if necessary :)</p>
<p>Thanks guys! i’ll pm you all right now :)</p>