Can anyone read my UMich Supplemental Essay?

Is anyone wiling to read my UMich Writing Supplement and give me some feedback on it? I am about 75 words over the word limit so I’d also appreciate any suggestions on what I could cut out.
This is the prompt:

Describe the unique qualities that attract you to the specific undergraduate College or School (including preferred admission and dual degree programs) to which you are applying at the University of Michigan. How would that curriculum support your interests?

sure :smiley:

Bump…

I will! A close friend got accepted last year and I read his essays

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