Can anyone review my UChicago essay?

[kukumalu]

<p>This is my first draft. Feel free to throw bombs, I can take any criticism...^_^ Thank you!</p>

[unihopeful11]

<p>will read. pm it over</p>

[ruixue62]

<p>I will read it</p>

[rsaxena]

<p>PM it over…</p>

[Programmer]

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

[EnemyCrabs]

<p>PM it over.</p>

[Yennaaa]

<p>I’ll read it… pm?</p>

[blenda220]

<p>PM it, I’ll take a look</p>

[csr3366]

<p>I will read~</p>

[renee0731]

<p>I’ll read it! If you’d like to read mine also haha</p>

[franchen]

<p>just pm me!
i’ll give you my comment!</p>

[Whartongrad]

<p>I will be able to review your essay and provide you with constructive criticism.</p>

<p>PM it over to me</p>

[ptlazarus]

<p>I’ll be happy to read and critique it. PM it over.</p>

[orangesmile]

<p>Pm it over</p>

[hypmom]

<p>Ooh I’ll read. Chicago always has the best prompts.</p>

[eyelashwishes]

<p>I’m also applying to UChicago, want to swap? :3</p>

[zhuangzi]

<p>Im apply to Chicago too. I’ll be happy to look over it. Pm it over</p>