Can I get a quick review of my MIT optional essay? (Will review back)

College Essays
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<p>I'm PM you guys it.
Word Count: 409</p>

2

<p>you still up for it?</p>

3

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

4

<p>I’m interested.</p>

5

<p>Hey, MIT huh? I’m really interested. Many people applying to MIT truly amaze me :)</p>

6

<p>Oops, sorry. I forgot that the deadline passed, so you must have submitted already.</p>

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<p>can istill read it?</p>