Hi guys! So, I submitted my Harvard application two weeks ago, and now looking it over again it seems to be rather radical. Could this sink my application if read by the wrong person?
Doubtful. IMO, the essay won’t sink your application because it is radical. However, an essay could sink your application if it is bad.
Now put away your application packet and concentrate on finishing out your senior year. Rereading your essays will just cause needless anxiety.
It could, depending. But it is too late now. You might rewrite for other schools if it is your common app essay.
I think that every part of the application plays a part. If you’re on the bubble, then I think that an essay could make or break the decision.
But you knew all that before submitting the essay. You chose to submit it. So get past this issue; it’s too late to do anything about it.
Not sure what you mean by “radical”…I agree with others that it would be good to relax and enjoy the rest of senior year,but if you find you cannot stop worrying about it, I think we would need more info in order to reassure you 
You probably do want to take risks (in a good way) in your essay to stand out at a school with a tiny acceptance rate. I agree with the others that it is what it is now. You took your shot. Good luck!
Statistically, from a “game theory” perspective, I believe that radical is better than bland.
@compmom @sherpa @AroundHere So my essay revolved around being black in white spaces and really just attacked the notion of “black privilege” that is starting to permeate through society. I just feel that the essay would only connect with a fellow African-American looking back at the verbage and sentiments used. I don’t know. I’m probably just psyching myself out. Also, it was written in a poetic format used to make the message more pronounced and apparent.
It saddens me that you feel that your essay could only be appreciated by an African American.
I think it will resonate with whomever reads it- good lyck!
First, I think that you are not giving enough credit to the people reading your essays. Second, since the time to have thought of that, however inaccurate it may be, was before you sent the application, the only thing you should do is let it go.
Sounds interesting to me, and most likely relatable for many. And skieurope’s advice to let it go is wise:)